I've cleaned up one of my short stories:
In the future, a corporate hit-man imprisoned for mass murder escapes with the help of two strange men and a mysterious benefactor.
Read Angel, 109K PDF, 12 pages (pre-edit version)
Let me know what you think of it.
This version has yet to benefit from an editor pass. I thought it would be fun to show the different stages of writing, to see how it changes.
On other blogs, commenters are debating the merits of editors. Personally, I think they can only help.
I'll post the edited version of Angel later so everyone can form their own opinion.