Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Short story: "Angel"

I've cleaned up one of my short stories:

In the future, a corporate hit-man imprisoned for mass murder escapes with the help of two strange men and a mysterious benefactor.

Read Angel, 109K PDF, 12 pages (pre-edit version)

Let me know what you think of it.

This version has yet to benefit from an editor pass. I thought it would be fun to show the different stages of writing, to see how it changes.

On other blogs, commenters are debating the merits of editors. Personally, I think they can only help.

I'll post the edited version of Angel later so everyone can form their own opinion.

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